Bella Swan « Thread Started on Jul 2, 2007, 3:55pm »
Name: Isabella Swan Gender: female Age: eighteen Hair Color: dark brown Eye Color: brown Physical Description: Bella is very fair-skinned, with long, straight, dark brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. Her face is heart-shaped—a wide forehead with a widow’s peak, large, wide-spaced eyes, prominent cheekbones, a thin nose and a narrow jaw with a pointed chin. Her lips are a little out of proportion, a bit too full for her jaw line. Her eyebrows are darker than her hair and more straight than they are arched. She’s slender but not at all muscular, and weighs about 115 pounds. She has stubby fingernails because she has a nervous habit of biting them. Personality: She is very quiet, but very stubborn. She loves to use sarcasm and anyone who can handle this. She gets very close with people and this sometimes isn't the greatest, for when they leave her it will hurt all the more. She is very smart and will take the hardest classes at school. She is clumsy which at times will cast her into a 'damsel in distress' situation Talents: She is accident prone. This is in a way a talent but not really a good one. She is smart and can figure people out easily. History: Her parents, Charlie Swan and Renee Dwyer, split up when she was six months old. She lived with her mother in Sunny Arizona for her whole life until she turned sixteen and decided to come and live with her father. She was swarmed with attention. This came to her at a shock. For she didn't think herself beautiful. She made friends quickly and easily. This was not a hard task. For most the people were nice and friendly. She did well in school because most of the classes were ones she had already taken. So she would doze off in class and talk to other people. She lived like this for two years now she is in her senior year, and hopes it will be her best. Sample Post:
The 'part albino' girl walked down the hallway with her best friend Jessica Stanley. Jessica was very beautiful but for some reason wasn't as popular with other people as Bella was. The tiny girl was talking none stop, this is what she was known for, filling Bella in with the latest gossip. But Bella didn't hear a word she said. She would nod her head when it seemed she was supposed to but other then that she was thinking of completely different stuff. Like what was that boy who was sitting next to her problem? Even everyone else seemed to notice. What was his name again?
These thoughts were filling her mind completely. "Bella? Are you listening to me?" Hearing her name Bella snapped back to reality. "Sorry? What was that?" Jess just sighed and shook her head. "I don't get you sometimes Bella." She looked around. Obviously waiting for Mike, her boyfriend. "I asked you if you were going to the dance." Now it was Bella's turn to sigh. "No. No one has asked me." Jessica gave a smirk. Bella didn't like dancing at all..... No one was well coordinated enough to make up for her. " I gotta go Jess. See you in Trig." She waved back to Jessica. The smalled girl waved back and walked into her classroom.
You need to rewrite the description. I noticed that it is a copy of the physical description on Twilight Lexicon. And you are missing something else. To find it, reread the profile guidelines. Thank you.
Re: Bella Swan « Reply #5 on Mar 16, 2009, 4:50pm »
im super excited i get to represent balla on friday night til 130 am nd walk around with a hot guy tht looks like edwardd for modeling nd i get paidd to look like her yyyaaayy!!!!!!!!!!:)
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